Let me tell you something about lunchtime at PBS

Let me tell you something about lunchtime at PBS. When the bell rings the teacher lets us out to eat our lunch. Everyone eats lunch with their friends. After the lunch some people go outside for training or to play handball. Some Ls1 & Ls2 play hand ball like a small competition. The training people do Netball, Rugby or Basketball. Some little kids run around the field like a small cheetahs.

Today for writing we talked about how to write a story at PBS. When our time was up my partner and I checked each other’s work for mistakes in the writing. My partner and I looked for where it makes sense and where it need more details.