‘Let me tell you about my worst mistake in my old school. At the school teachers told us to draw the paint on the wall but I accidentally painted the window. My teacher told me to get the paint off so I tried to get the paint off the window, but the paint was very hard and wouldn’t come off. The next day there was no paint on the window so I asked my teacher where it was. My teacher said “I cleaned it up last night.”
I told my teacher I was sorry for painting on the window and said thank you for cleaning the window. When I saw it was ok my body is stopped shaking because I thought I needed to buy a new window!
Today we did the 5-7-10 activity for writing to describe the worst mistake we have ever made. We had to write for 5 minutes, share what we had written with a buddy for 7 minutes, and then carry on writing for another 10 minutes.
Hi Miki, Great to see that you have been writing lots. I also like the fact that in the beginning you wrote, "Let me tell you about"
ReplyDeletewe I read that I felt like you were talking to me and when I normaly read things I don't feel like they were talking to me.
Thanks for sharing you amazing work with us. WELL DONE.
Your Sincerely
Sanujan