tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8297531258967371754.post3342544769822684441..comments2023-08-16T06:13:04.173-07:00Comments on Mikihiro : Pecha FlickrBlogs 2015http://www.blogger.com/profile/12596153244533180642noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8297531258967371754.post-7793527175515648972018-08-19T19:42:37.759-07:002018-08-19T19:42:37.759-07:00Thank you San Kyaw for commenting on my blog. The ...Thank you San Kyaw for commenting on my blog. The reason that I chose to write about rescue is that my partner and I like to help other people.Mikihirohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09533742096575484259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8297531258967371754.post-42445737638827765792018-08-19T15:31:29.440-07:002018-08-19T15:31:29.440-07:00Hey Miki, your writing was impressive. The part th...Hey Miki, your writing was impressive. The part that hooked me in is when you wrote ' I was there but I couldn't swim and I might cause a bigger problem'This sentences hooked me in because he did not swim so he won't cause more trouble. Good job Miki.Joshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12711450902396425336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8297531258967371754.post-47310300948023294722018-08-19T15:31:14.335-07:002018-08-19T15:31:14.335-07:00Hi Miki and Junior I really enjoyed reading your p...Hi Miki and Junior I really enjoyed reading your paragraph. 'Not to far from us another small bout full of people wanted to do the same as us' This sentence hooked me in because I thought it was only them and no one else. I was wondering why you chose to write about rescue?San kyawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05562544378330831324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8297531258967371754.post-36769626017237133592018-08-19T15:30:24.764-07:002018-08-19T15:30:24.764-07:00Hi Miki and Junior, This was an amazing work you h...Hi Miki and Junior, This was an amazing work you have written and done. I suggest that you should put more power and volume to your screencastify. My favourite part was paragraph 3 because it says "The whirring sound of the helicopters blades came louder.<br /><br />Great work boys :)<br /><br />JoshuaJoshua Vilikokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15207872282943423338noreply@blogger.com